tutorial.xml corrections and updates for installation instructions and examples

doc/user/preface.xml

@@ -214,9 +214,9 @@
   <para>
     Please report bugs in Tarantool at <link
     xlink:href="http://github.com/tarantool/tarantool/issues"/>. You can
-    contact developers directly on
+    contact developers directly on the
     <link xlink:href="irc://irc.freenode.net#tarantool">#tarantool</link>
-    IRC channel or via a mailing list,
+    IRC channel on freenode, or via a mailing list,
     <link xlink:href="https://googlegroups.com/group/tarantool">Tarantool Google group</link>.
   </para>
 </section>

doc/user/tutorial.xml

@@ -97,8 +97,8 @@ release=`lsb_release -c -s`
 <para>
 There is always an up-to-date Ubuntu repository at
 <link xlink:href="http://tarantool.org/dist/master/ubuntu">http://tarantool.org/dist/master/ubuntu</link>
-The repository contains builds for Ubuntu 12.04 "precise", 12.10 "quantal",
-13.04 "raring", 13.10 "saucy", 14.04 "Trusty".
+The repository contains builds for Ubuntu 12.04 "precise",
+13.10 "saucy", and 14.04 "trusty".
 Add the tarantool.org repository to your apt sources list
 $release is an environment variable which will contain the Ubuntu version
 code e.g. "precise". If you want the version that comes with
@@ -174,12 +174,12 @@ add the new section thus:
 <simplesect>
 <title>Fedora</title>
 <para>
-These instructions are applicable for Fedora 20.
+These instructions are applicable for Fedora 19 or Fedora 20.
 Pick the Fedora repository, for example <link xlink:href="http://tarantool.org/dist/master/fedora/20/x86_64">http://tarantool.org/dist/master/fedora/20/x86_64</link> for version 20, x86-64.
 Add the following section to your yum repository list
 (<filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>)
 (in the following instructions, $releasever i.e. Fedora release
-version must be 2 and $basearch i.e. base architecture must be x86_64):
+version must be 19 or 20 and $basearch i.e. base architecture must be x86_64):
 <programlisting>
 <userinput>
 [tarantool]
@@ -194,13 +194,12 @@ For example, if you have Fedora version 20, you can add the new section thus:
 <userinput>
 <command>echo</command> "[tarantool]" | \
 <command>sudo tee</command> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
-<command>echo</command> "name=Fedora - Tarantool"| <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
-<command>echo</command> "baseurl="http://tarantool.org/dist/master/fedora/20/x86_64/" | \
+<command>echo</command> "name=Fedora-20 - Tarantool"| <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
+<command>echo</command> "baseurl=http://tarantool.org/dist/master/fedora/20/x86_64/" | \
 <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
 <command>echo</command> "enabled=1" | <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
-<command>echo</command> "gpgcheck=0" | <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename>
-</userinput>
-</programlisting>
+<command>echo</command> "gpgcheck=0" | <command>sudo tee</command> <option>-a</option> <filename>/etc/yum.repos.d/tarantool.repo</filename></userinput></programlisting>
+Then install with <code>sudo yum install tarantool</code>.
 </para>
 </simplesect>
 
@@ -237,7 +236,7 @@ so it's not a true binary download, some source code is involved.
 First upgrade Clang (the C compiler) to version 3.2 or later using
 Command Line Tools for Xcode disk image version 4.6+ from
 Apple Developer web-site. Then download the recipe file from
-<link xlink:href="tarantool.org/dist/master/tarantool.rb">tarantool.org/dist/master/tarantool.rb</link>.
+<link xlink:href="http://tarantool.org/dist/master/tarantool.rb">tarantool.org/dist/master/tarantool.rb</link>.
 Make the file executable, execute it, and the script in the file should
 handle the necessary steps with cmake, make, and make install.
 </para>
@@ -530,8 +529,7 @@ tarantool> box.cfg{listen=3301}
 2014-08-07 09:41:41.095 ... saving snapshot `./00000000000000000000.snap.inprogress'
 2014-08-07 09:41:41.127 ... done
 2014-08-07 09:41:41.128 ... primary: bound to 0.0.0.0:3301
-2014-08-07 09:41:41.128 ... ready to accept requests
-2014-08-07 09:41:41.128 ... started</computeroutput></programlisting>
+2014-08-07 09:41:41.128 ... ready to accept requests</computeroutput></programlisting>
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -623,8 +621,7 @@ The server name is <computeroutput><filename>tarantool</filename></computeroutpu
   <command>~/tarantool/src/tarantool</command> </userinput></programlisting>
 </para>
 <para>
-3. Try these requests:<programlisting><userinput>box.cfg{}
-console = require('console')
+3. Try these requests:<programlisting><userinput>sconsole = require('console')
 console.connect('localhost:3301')
 box.space.tester:select{2}</userinput></programlisting>
 </para>